Christmas is a time for giving and spending time with the one’s you love, however I still would love a white Christmas. I was in bed no snow on the ground wishing for a white Christmas however my wish will not come true. It isn’t snowing now then it won’t ever snow tomorrow on Christmas day. As my eyes slowly got, heavy, my body slowly got weak so I shut my eyes and went to sleep dreaming of a white Christmas that would never happen this year. When I wake in the morning there is no blanket of snow on the ground, not even a single snow flake falling from the precious sky just the wind of wishes swirling around my mind. Why did I dream about a white Christmas? Because I think it would snow just for me, how stupid can I get?
“Well,” I think in my head I should wake up my family and we can open the presents, even thought all I wish for is white glistening Christmas. “Wake up every one its Christmas” I yell with a non-enthusiastic voice “YAY, its Christmas!”My little brother cheered. As I look at the first present I close my eyes and wish for at least just one snow flake to fall from the dark cloudy sky. “LOOK” my brother screeched, “It’s snowing!” I jumped up with the biggest smile upon my face and ran outside, not caring how excruciatingly cold it is, being thankful for my family and a white Christmas day of love.
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i liked the description in your story. Good Job!!
ReplyDeleteI think you went a little too fast, try to add more of what you were feeling, Othere than that, awesome job!!
ReplyDeleteI loved the line'How stupid can I get?'
good story but your story was to short. it went to fast something else needs to happen in your story. there was also one sentance that didnt make sense "It isn’t snowing now then it won’t ever snow tomorrow on Christmas day. it should be " if it isnt snowing now, then it will never snow on christmas day."
ReplyDeletethe reason why i put" if it isnt snowing now than itwont snow ever tomorow on christmas is becase it was christmas eve
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