Monday, January 11, 2010

slow, down

Me and my friends running, running as fast as we can to get away from a horrible bear. Wind in are hair. wind rushing with us as we see the cold freezing water "we have to jump!"
As i was falling i saw the rocks that we could poerce threw our skin. Ihit the rock, the water came after my leg snaped as i slowly drifted to the bottom i fell asleep. when i awoken i here my friends
"What do we do? is she brething"
i opened my eyes my leg was in pain but i survived i made it across the river.



i was rideing my moder cycle threw the woods going as fast as i can. When i hit a rock. i went flying threw the air like a bird in the lonly sky my life flashed before my eyes as the ground became clearer it ran threw my mined like a radio on replay. i hit the ground with a yelp as a stranger ran up to me and asked if i was okay. i slowley tryed to get up it felt like my ribs were piercing threw my fragile skin, i survived i am alive , for now.

3 comments:

  1. SLOW DOWN !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. they were alright , i think you need to slow down more in both of them , they both need more work though, good job!

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