Friday, October 2, 2009

Emotoins

The 5 year old boy was crushed and broken. Tears rolled down his hot beat red face like a rain drop on a glass window ,when he figured out his cat died .The cat that his parents got the day after he was born.People say that a baby cant smile that young but when he saw that kitten his face brightend up like a candle light on a dark night.



the happy strick.

It was the last pitch it was a tie so far 10-10 if we got this batter out then we would go to the champinship. I riased my arm and i closed my eyes as i threw the ball. all of as soden i here the crowd go wild. As i opened my eyes i saw all my teamates run for me then i get lifted up it was a chance of a life time and i wouldnt trade it for any thing.



the alarm


my grandpa said he was as tirerd as a sloth and if you ask me he walked to his room like a sloth to.well at this time it was only 5:oo in the after noon although he is 95 years old. I started helping my mom cooke dinneri was cooking grill cheese and my mom was cooking fries. I whent to put the cheese on the other sandwitch but as i put the sliced cheese on it the alarm went of my grandpa screamed and that was the last i heard of him turns out he died of fright and that was the sadest time of my life it left a dent in my heart.



the mean brother

The baby was pure red in rage when her brother took her one of a kind blond haired with a pink dress barbie doll. She martched right up to her brother and damanded he give her barbie back. He wouldnt give the barbie back enless she took a cookie from the cookie jar. She said "NO" and went to her mom and told her what happen. Her brother got grounded and she got her doll and two cookies for dessert.

3 comments:

  1. The story about the sad boy was great. Great vocabulary and it was good that you showed it instead of just telling it. Great job!

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  2. Kiwi girl that story about baseball was excellent because you didn't say happy you just told how happy he or she was. But I didn't like that you didn't say who the person was that was batting. Did you want to make it a mystery or did you not put the name on by accident.

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  3. ants in my pants i thought it would be better if i didnt put a name it would make it have a mysterey like you said!!

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